Thursday, January 24, 2013

How Did Casey Feel


Author’s note: I wrote this to show I know how to right a point of view essay.

Casey at the bat is told from the point of view of the people in the stands. Now, let’s take time to look at it from Casey’s point of view.

It’s my time to show all the people what I can do. I’m the best hitter they have. This team needs me! I am going to save every kid on this team and win the game. The ball is going to fly right out of the stadium. Just the me hit the ball.

The crowed thought Cooney  and Barrows would do good and if they follow through I can get to the plate. It didn’t work and there’s two outs. Then things changed and my team got two guys on base. Now the fans can take a break the really hitter is coming up to the plate.

Here it is , my big chance things are going to change. I can do it. I know I’m the best. The first pitch was a strike; that was pure luck. The second was a strike, too. I thought nobody could strike me out. Boy was I wrong! Me, the mighty Casey has struck out!



Friday, January 4, 2013

Never Giving Up


Authors Note:  I wrote this to show that I know what a theme is.

In the book Holes, by Louis Sachar even though we may be treated unfairly, if we never give up, good things can happen to us. Then the when back to go dig one more hole they found the chest that they were looking for.

Stanley was not the one who took  the shoes. But he got blamed for the he did do. A kid named zero was the kid that stole the shoes and he because friends with Stanley. They because friends on the first day. Zero can dig the holes the fastest out of everyone there.

He keeps trying to stay out of trouble like not getting in fight all the time. So what he does he just keeps digging and makes friends on the way.

Zero and Stanley ran away to the mountain that is shaped like a thumb. Then the they here on their way they had the survive their way to the mountain. Then they got the back of the mountain there was to field of vegetables they  had no problem  trying to surviving after they got over the mountain.

That is why I want to use the theme that the where treated unfairly they had a very good thing happen to them. That is why you should never give up.