reflection of a chapter

Aurthur's note: this chapter i talked about was really good i think.

Imagine  yourself running as fast as you can going down the football field. Having 11 other people running after you. You are also the best running back in the league. Then you fall in a hole, because the field is all beaten up and not in good shape. A lot of people can relate to this because a lot of kids play football. I also play football that is how I relate to this chapter

Will the running back, thought that football was going to leave as the sneaker factory had. Will and the guys were sure they were going to have another great season of football. The author did a good job with the paragraphs. The sentences make seance and he put in good punctuation.

The author explains what is going on in the chapter. like when it is happing in the book. I like when the author was talking that the sneaker factory had closed and left like that. Will thought that was going to happen to the football team.

Will was running down the field and he fell in a hole. He had not  got the touchdown. The Aurthur did a good job with the paragraphs.  That is why I think this is a good chapter.