Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Prediction Pieces


Authors Note: I wrote the ending like this because when i read the stories I was getting a little dark and stuff like that.  

He ran home to go melt the golden hook but he was very nerves to do it because of what the note said at his grave. He got back to his house and turned on the lights and the stove to melt the hook. Right then he was going to start melting the golden hook  there was a loud noise coming from the back yard it was carder the with one hand and no golden hook. He was here to get his hook back and he did with one pull of the trigger on his gun.

1 comment:

  1. YOU NEED TO ADD MORE CONTENT AND EDITS TO FINISH YOUR PIECE

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